Friday, November 21, 2014

My poem, The Lake


I made this poem based on an original poem called "The Lake"  when I did an analysis on it I got to the conclusion that it was about pollution and then I started to get some key words that could help me get inspired to right a poem based on what I though of the first poem (the lake). 

I wanted to make a poem that talks about doing everything you can because people usually when they see something terrible they prefure to go the easy way out by avoiding it, but im saying you should not do that but instead help that person in need because with one little act of careness could change that persons life so big. 

Anyway

You might run into a dark  black alley and you don´t want to go there,
Go in there anyway

You may see sorrow somewhere and you don´t want to do anything about it
help them anyway

You may see death but you don´t want to die
help if it kills you anyway

If you could help anyone even nature
Help it anyway

If you see a loney person
give him company anyway

IF you see someone with fear or scared
Make them fell happy again


If there is a disaster or there is terror somewhere
do anything you can to help

If someone is discombobulated or confused
show them the right way

If there is silence at night and there is depretion
be the spark of that place  and make the people happy

Do all this things even though you may get a kick in the teeth but whenever you help someone, someone else could help and make a difference.

1 Comments:

At March 23, 2015 at 8:07 PM , Blogger Steve said...

Hey, that's pretty good! Keep writing!

 

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